Wednesday, October 8, 2008

"You Won The Lottery"

If I win the lottery, the first thing that I´ll is buy a big house next to the beach, that it´ll has big windows, where I can see sunrise every day and wake up earring the sound waves sea. Additionally I´ll have there a pool and big park where my daughter can play when she wants.

Second place, I´ll buy a car brand Hummer, I´ve wished buy it always. Other thing that I´ll do is save part of the money and I´ll try to help children and poor people that need food and money to live.
Currently I need buy many things that can help me to live better, but the money is not the most important in the life, because people can live without money, without clothes, without a house and without eat, but these things we can get everywhere, we most to be interested in to be a caring person.
In conclusion part of money I´ll spent and part of money I´ll save and I´ll try to help people, if I win the lottery, but it is a dream.

1 comment:

Jeff L. said...

Good organization and good ideas! Just watch the run-on sentence in the third paragraph (that means a sentence that is too long). It's best to use only one or two commas per sentence.